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Grant_Glapsvidhrson2 months agoIn my mental ending, Mrs. Carter kills Trish, her husband, and then herself.
Anonymous25 days agoWhere's the rest of the damn story? Your alternate ending offered nothing of value. This is just another worthless open-ended story. You can do better.
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