by SupervillainX
The opening paragraph had me hooked. I actually laughed out loud--because I've been there myself, but also because it said a shitload in a very few words.
I've been lucky enough to have a couple of Mrs. Feenys in my life. The entire story brought a smile to my lips and a twinge of nostalgia to my heart. You captured it, man, and I look forward to future stories. Erotic--nasty--real. Great job!
By the way, I've been visiting this site for years and this is the first time I ever left a comment. Write (right) on!!
Good, entertaining read. A couple of typos, but overall.....pretty good!
His writting skills are better than average. These stories could be fantasy but I think he writes well enough to be believable.