All Comments on 'Mrs. Feeny'

by SupervillainX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You CAN write!!

The opening paragraph had me hooked. I actually laughed out loud--because I've been there myself, but also because it said a shitload in a very few words.

I've been lucky enough to have a couple of Mrs. Feenys in my life. The entire story brought a smile to my lips and a twinge of nostalgia to my heart. You captured it, man, and I look forward to future stories. Erotic--nasty--real. Great job!

By the way, I've been visiting this site for years and this is the first time I ever left a comment. Write (right) on!!

Blueman5410Blueman5410almost 3 years ago

Good, entertaining read. A couple of typos, but overall.....pretty good!

jjj92jjj92over 2 years ago

Great read! Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

His writting skills are better than average. These stories could be fantasy but I think he writes well enough to be believable.

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