by Kirk482002
Loved it. Just loved it.
No mention of inches.
A full appreciation for his emotions. He's naive but not a total idiot. Very human story while still being sexy. Excellent work.
Overall well written and great story. Maybe you can add more experiences that happened while he was in school. But still great story.
The belching was kind of overdone i thought but other than that a real nice story. Thanks yoron.
This was already a great story but Pat's surprise really raised the game.Like all good fantasies just that little bit too good to be true.
you have the starting of one hot serial!!
Hope there is more, what that is...I leave to you.
Thanks
Congratulations on another wonderfully written story~ one that draws you into a sweet; yet very erotic scene of a first time experience! Thank you! for still another sexy, mature heroine!!!