All Comments on 'Mrs. Miller'

Thanks for the read.

Dear Emily,

Wonderful story, such an exciting read, I'd love Jennifer to do a threesome with Brian and Bruce......Just a thought, no more, regards Jack.

Emily you hit the spot so well as usual the tone, content and style are perfect please keep it up (you are keeping mine up) lol

I just love your stories, all your stories. This one has a lovely innocent build up and like Brucie I had to rush off to the bathroom. I love the way Brucie enjoys it, encourages her and wants to share his wife with the older man. It is so erotic, my hand was in my pants throughout. Many thank Emily. Please more stories, another chapter of Old Tom would be great.

Well done Emily, you have produced a very erotic story. I love the theme and your grammar is superb. I look forward to more like this one.

My immediate reaction to your story ,was it was tame and slow to build up , but as i continued reading it , i found it drawing me into the story imagining myself as Brian and how i would react to Bruce,s involvement etc , i enjoyed the cursing words as they gradually got worse , on the whole i thought it was a worthwhile effort and very enjoyable , maybe you could write another chapter taking the affair further and see where it goes , but if you choose not to that's fine , but whatever you decide please keep up your writing with future stories i have added you as a favourite .

Brilliant as usual Emily, I wish I was your next door neighbour you are such a delight

Charming story that builds intensity along the way.

Another offbeat tale by one of the most unique writers on the site

Perhaps it should have been listed in a different category, but I'm not complaining.

So nice to see a young man who appreciates the stoutness and bullheaded wisdom of his elders. I can't help but think that both Brucie and Jen might have enjoyed a touch of Brian's firm hand.

Another fine story! Thank you.

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Emily has yet again provided us with a nicely paced story, when Brian gets his reward so do Brucie and Jennifer. Loved it! It would be great if another chapter explored the relationships further.

The ending was predictable but the way you did it was amazing. Nice pace throughout. It would be nice to see a threesome in another chapter with her servicing one cock with her mouth and one with her pussy. I am sure you have the writing skills to make it enjoyable for all three of them with a little more description of what they are doing. I will be recalling this when I am servicing myself in bed tonight.

A great opening as you can take these characters a lot further.

I would love to see the brother and sister in law get involved as you've hinted at discipline. Can't wait to read it.

I loved the way the story builds up in a no-rush way. Increases the anticipation and is very sexy.

David

One word of advice--don't use same letter names for your characters. I found it hard to keep Bruce and Brian straight as the story progressed. Bruce and Jody or George or whatever would have been better.

Thanks for the read! cd

Hi Emily,

I just finished reading your Mrs. Miller story, and I honestly think it’s the best one you’ve written so far.

The pace of the buildup in the excitement was perfect, gradually becoming more intense and naughtier as the story progressed. The story was fairly short at just two pages, which makes it easier for the reader.You did not waste a lot of words describing details about the character’s appearance, like how tall they are or what they were wearing, the type of furniture in the room or what kind of car they had. I despise stories with a lot of extraneous words that don’t advance the story line, like how big her tits are and what her nipples looked like, how big his cock is etc, as it is irrelevant (and I don’t give a shit).

You worked your magic with the dialogue. I knew what the characters were thinking and how they felt at the exciting times. As usual the characters are such nice people and so kind to each other. Is this a usual character of the British? Bottom line is I loved it and can’t wait to read more about William and Mildred.

Five stars from me! You rock!

Bruce and Brian- WTF????? Way too many authors on this site use similar names for two characters. There are thousands of available names and I am baffled as to why authors insist upon using names that confuse the reader. I totally agree with

theCarolinadreamer that you should make the story easy for your readers and not require them to keep going back to early in the story to determine who is who. Other than that I love the story (although I will never understand why a husband would want to watch someone else fuck his wife) You did a great job.

Loved this tale very much. It was like reliving an old experience! Thank you very much

I loved the build up Emily, just imagining myself in Jennifer’s place. So erotic, thank you

Fantastic.

Most arousing story in your collection. I would love to bang my trolley into Mrs Miller’s In Tesco.

Emily, welcome back! This was an amazing story, with a wonderful build up, and a wonderful climax, if you will....loved it! 5*****

M

I love your story Emily - your simply MUST write a sequel

P L E A S E

Noblegent45

Martin

I would like to thank you for the very kind comments. It has been overwhelming and very pleasing.

Some of my earlier stories were criticised (and rightly so) for grammar mistakes and getting some names mixed up. I have since tried to be much more careful.

I think I will try a second part to Mrs Miller.

Emily

Lovely build up, and a pleasure watching Bruce's descent into cuck land! Now that Brian has broken the ice, let's see him master all of this naughty wife's orifices? As an older male, former teacher, I am hoping that the "seeds" of future disciplinary sessions with Brian's brother and sister-in-law will ensue! BOTH Mrs. Miller and Brucie might heartily benefit from their expertise.... SO many possibilities!! BRAVO!!

And 60 is not elderly! I remember.

I am a bit older than Brian and not into the cuck thing, but I found your story rather stimulating! I liked the way you dragged it out. I think that is how it might happen. I can't wait to read the second part. I am very much into spanking female bottoms!

For such a short story it is very erotic. I wasn't sure at first but just kind of got drawn into it the further I read. It was almost like I was sitting on a chair besides Bruce whacking away while Brian had his way with Jen. Nice story, thanks.

Brilliant and very realistic

Who knew this story would unfold into a delightful kinky game of cuckoldry?

And so much more to explore.....

Mmmmm.....I am so eager to read the sequel.....will I be able to refrain from complete release???.

I loved it. Very simple but very erotic

Nicely written, looking forward to part 2

Very enjoyable story. Liked the way the pace of the story increased and the language became more graphic as the narrative unfolded. I'm relishing the prospect of reading the sequel. I'm sure it will be as delightfully erotic as the first part.

Lovely erotic story Emily ! Voted 5 stars for it ... quite erotic and in a pleasant atmosphere. Really enjoyd the buildup of sexual tension and excitement between the among the three of them. Well done !