All Comments on 'Mrs. Miller'

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

OK, I guess the answer to 'what's her name' is Jessy, since he called her Jessica towards the end.

Not Jennifer.

OK. Is her name Jenny? or Jessy?

Maybe she schizophrenic, you know, dual personality?

A little proofreading goes a long way, you know.

Nice one, nice plot, good character set, descriptions were good, my only complaint is that her name changed throughout, and I feel you rushed the ending.

Sort of left us “hanging” at the end. Needs a real conclusion - Chapter 2?

Liz is an annoying interfering bitch

Jenny? Jessy? Whoever she is, I hope everyone figures it out before the wedding.

Damn you write good stories and other Authors could learn from you! One great thing is you write like you got good scores in English Literature by listening to your teacher. I taught College level English Lit. but after four years it seemed as though the class was there to just get a passing score. Quite that and my Editing job and moved to Fairbanks Alaska and took on a Field Editor position with a well known Hunting Publication. Loved that job! Thank you for not using the dot dot dot pause. I tried to teach my students that the word were to express when the Author wanted the reader to pause. Thank you for being a great Author, your works are appreciated! Another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Guns save lives. I almost quit when she said, "No Guns." I am former law enforcement.

Otherwise, this is a good story with good character development.

Ed

Nice!

Heart warming.. yet pretty hot.. liked it

Well told! 5*

Enjoyable read.

Good story. Well done! Agree with the other reviews re Jessy/Jenny/Jessica.

Very nice romance. 5/5 You do need a proofreader though. Also, who were the two men in the first burglary? Is there a chapter 2?

Yeah, some editing issues, and entirely predictable, but still….

A pleasant little tale in which nice people come to a good end. Sometimes, that’s all you need. Keep writing.

Who is this Jessy that keeps taking Jenny's place? Or Jessica?

I liked the story but I'm confused if it is Jenny Jessica or Jessy.

This is an erotic story that a 7th grader would be proud of. From moving in to passionate love in a few weeks. This young woman is a bank vice president. Really? As others have mentioned the 7th grader writing this didn't even have the courtesy to proof read it so that he could discover the obvious on-again, off-again issue with the name of the woman MC. I'm not sure why I stuck with it for most of the story (except for the juvenile obligatory sex scenes which I skipped altogether). 2* for a clear waste of time.

Great story 5 stars

It does not need it but a part 2 would be nice

The problem is the name is it Jenny or Jessie.

Sweet and good, despite the name mix-ups

Enjoyable story!

5

Nicely done. Simple, straightforward romance with a little drama thrown in. What more could we ask for?

Thank you for sharing

So, what is her name Jenny, Jessy, or Jessica? Good romance story even with those errors.

On the plus side, enjoyable story, pretty good sex descriptions.

However, an editor, or more careful proofreading, might have prevented the Jenny, Jessy and Jessica flip-flops.