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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I wish Mike find out the truth...

I wish Mike come to his senses n find out the truth...n have Chantal n Edie executed... like a common street Bitch that they r...

But I hate Mike for punching women..n raping Shanna..

He is a Smart man he should have known than Chantal is the reason behind his fiancee changes in beheaviour..

MarkT63MarkT63almost 4 years ago
Unsure?

I'm not sure how I feel about ruining poor Stan. He was an asshole; but does he reallt deserve being a effeminate cuckold??!! Just divorce him and let him go in peace!!!

NitpicNitpicalmost 3 years ago
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Mike is a first class arsehole.No women should be treated the way he treats Chantal and Edie.

russ603russ60310 months ago

Love the story line, but how can you not know the difference between "prostrate" and "prostate"? Prostrate means bent over to the floor, or horizontal as on a bed. Prostate is the gland that stores sperm in the male reproduction system.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Meh. Sloppy writing. Crap story. 2 stars. Get an editor.

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