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Chas1051Chas1051almost 4 years ago
X in place of a Z

I think you should have written, "She grazed her nails" instead of "graxed". Other than this, a good and enjoyable story.

pepepilotpepepilotalmost 4 years ago
Jerky

Story seemed jerky. It needs to flow better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Full of cliches.

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Filthy guy from Oxford in the UK. Writing what turns me on and I hope will also turn you on.