All Comments on 'Mrs. Sinclair Pt. 01'

I give it 5 stars. My first sex was with a much older woman and I like reading stories of young men pounding a mature pussy and shooting young hot seed into a mature womb.

Part 2 is a must!

Slow starting but you picked up the pace well. Looking forward to future parts. Thanks

Nice and slow. Thanks for the great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please do continue this story......

why Not tell what you like about her instead of focusing on the negative?

Please know the difference between "lose" and "loose" and how to use the correct word properly. Also, there were a few times where the wrong word is used or another word was placed in error - perhaps re-writing and forgetting to add or remove the proper word? All in all, good story. And I agree with the other comment, tell us why you like the non-porn bits about her.

Intriguing

Buildup! Every young man's fantasy is to fuck an older, experienced woman!

I positioned myself for some intercourse.

Talk about a turn off. It's written like a boy of twelve would write.

Hope the others are better written.

For me...the flirtation was waaaaaayyyyy too slow.

They would have melded much sooner.

I thought the buildup was way too slow. Also, why would he have to notice his own tented shorts to know he was hard? Then the sex or "intercourse" was two paragraphs? Cmon. But the premise and concept was great. Shorten the flirting a bit, add some more heavy flirting and make the sex first time better.

Gutted...being older woman living alone I was certain you'd give her a full lush mature pubic pelt...but NO...!

Bravo.

I remembera few 'Mrs. Sinclairs' I would have liked to get to know like this! A well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Of course this had been what she’d been wanting all this time; to get thoroughly fucked by the next door neighbor boy.