by beware
This has been a very interesting story, well written. I hope the next one will be similar in content.
your articles are up there with encarta's and isawyourmommy's.should write more about these kind.
Great tension and beautifully plotted. Tremendous swings from touching warmth to exciting coolness. Very well written and enjoyable story.
very well rounded story, viry vivid, intense and i really feel the conclusion was good couldve been better if he got that busty brunette bitch to be his girl or something at the end. MY FIRST STORY. erotic at least. 16 yrs old too. haha fukk all yall i need a cigg...
A little longer but very exciting and gripping story. The narration is excellent. The ending of the story is unexpectedly very beautiful. In short, the story is well balanced.
honor is something to behold when it's motivated by love - thanks!