All Comments on 'Mrs. Tyler Teaches Ch. 01'

by JoeDreamer

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ou812matureou812matureabout 17 years ago
YES!!!!!!!!

We Loved it.....Very HOT!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very good

I hope maybe you get her pregnant and he stays with her .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Don't stop now

Very well written. What happens if you add more friends? Sounds like she could handle it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Part 1?

It says "Ch 01"... so I am hoping that means there is more! Much, MUCH more... Great story!

Jonathanmartin7Jonathanmartin7about 17 years ago
Another great one Joe!

Another great one Joe! I hope there are many more chapters to come! I just hope it doesn't interfere with your other story of Joel and Carrie!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Oh So Hot!!!

I hope this is chapter 1 of part 1. That was amazing! I can hardly wait to see what happens in chapter 2. Please, keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Can't Wait!

Can't wait for the next chapter that is!!!!! Very well told!!!!

Alvaron53Alvaron53about 17 years ago
Smokin' hot

That was smokin'. Thanks, Joe. Looking forward to chapter two.

TibxoTibxoabout 17 years ago
I agree with the others

What a great story you have started.

Looking forward to subsequent chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic

Great story, and pretty well written. I gave you 4 out 5 though, as there is some room for improvement. Don't let that make you think you didn't do a great job though.

The only recommendation I have is to find ways to take things just a little bit slower. As those things go, you did far better than most. However, I think just a little bit more detail, and moving the erotic encounters forward without any hurry at all will improve the story telling aspect. Just my opinion though, take it or leave it as you like. Keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Great story. I really enjoyed it.

AsgardcphAsgardcphabout 13 years ago
Wow

A really hot MILF story

deJay_13deJay_13almost 13 years ago
Good, but.......

Your plots are good, your descriptions of people are excellent, the dialog is good. You are an excellent story teller. The only thing that keeps it from being a "5" is the terrible grammar, the misspelling and the poor proofreading. Sorry.

Please use the services of a good proofreader and a grammarian.

de Jay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
teaches

Better than "The Graduate"!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
verbs

I read the first line---laying---story cannot be good if this person does not know the difference between --to lie and to lay---

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Leave them alone

Anonymous person don't judge someone just because they can't differentiate between two different words

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
THERE IS NOTHING BETTER THAN FUCKING OLDER WOMEN

they are the best fucks ever - they never run - they never tell - they just come back for me......always preferred older women as they are so much better and know what they want and teach you how to please them....and are ready and willing to fuck....much better than trying to get some young girl to fuck and then it was usually a rushed thing and never satisfying....always go for the older women - they know what they want and what they like.....

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
nicely spun

looking forward to their future.

gunmakergunmakerover 9 years ago

I do enjoy your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Can't wait to read more!

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
wow

beautifully written and very sexy!

Saxons08Saxons08over 3 years ago

Really liked it. My only really qualm was the fact that his mom told him to go over there and check on Mrs Tyler instead of just call back. The fact that a high schooler is the person that a divorcee feels comfortable opening up to would be a red flag for any mother and deemed wildly inappropriate. She wouldn’t be urging him to go over there.

racfguyracfguyover 2 years ago
Good, very good.

Brings back memories of my youth.

Then, there's some 'anonymous' moron that says "get her pregnant."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love a mature hairy pussy that is swollen and dripping with juice. Great sex!

Coochielover71Coochielover714 months ago

Love this chapter, can hardly wait for the next!!!!!!!!

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