All Comments on 'Mum Makes It a Perfect Birthday'

Good story. Well paced action.

Good story, well done. Maybe more sexy description of the mother (sexy outfits, body...) would be great if there are sequels. Also the mother mother playing in different contexts, situations, places, etc..

Ignore that Mano Blue comment who is a troll on here. Little boy fascinated by Miley Cyrus and Britney Spears stories. His Mum is unaware he's browsing that website. Pathetic

Ha, yeah, not bothered about negative comments, you can't please everyone, plus, it doesn't really make sense! Anyway, thanks 'anonymous', it was my first attempt, I always pictured a Keri Lynn type as the mother

I loved this! Please tell me there's another chapter coming??? Please please please!!

Trusting you write a sequel while they are in vacation on the Mediterranean her son becomes inspired to taunt his Mom on public pick ups and playing.

I loved your photoshoot story, but I'm a little posessive, don't like sharing mom with anyone, i think that's why the lower rating, 12k-15k words are needed, only mom and son fucking, mom's pussy is her son's pussy, son's fountain of youth.

Not bad but it is spelled sober not sobre. 3 stars.