All Comments on 'Mum Makes It a Perfect Birthday'

by DurtyQwerty

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
live4thebjlive4thebj7 months ago

Not bad but it is spelled sober not sobre. 3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved your photoshoot story, but I'm a little posessive, don't like sharing mom with anyone, i think that's why the lower rating, 12k-15k words are needed, only mom and son fucking, mom's pussy is her son's pussy, son's fountain of youth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Trusting you write a sequel while they are in vacation on the Mediterranean her son becomes inspired to taunt his Mom on public pick ups and playing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this! Please tell me there's another chapter coming??? Please please please!!

DurtyQwertyDurtyQwertyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Ha, yeah, not bothered about negative comments, you can't please everyone, plus, it doesn't really make sense! Anyway, thanks 'anonymous', it was my first attempt, I always pictured a Keri Lynn type as the mother

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, well done. Maybe more sexy description of the mother (sexy outfits, body...) would be great if there are sequels. Also the mother mother playing in different contexts, situations, places, etc..

Ignore that Mano Blue comment who is a troll on here. Little boy fascinated by Miley Cyrus and Britney Spears stories. His Mum is unaware he's browsing that website. Pathetic

MaxDecattMaxDecattalmost 3 years ago

Good story. Well paced action.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous