All Comments on 'Mum Makes The First Move Ch. 01'

Great start, can't wait for Chapter 2 I have given it 5 Stars, it deserves more.

Haven't heard the word gobbler for years, great story

Keep writing, Super story

Did you run out of energy? The entire thing seemed rushed, and if it's about he and mum, what's with all the other periphery? Stick to the story.

Lovely story, properly told.

The mother’s kiss promises us a great chapter 2.

(Hopefully)

This was like an episode of masterpiece or some bullshit.... How is this even incest .... Stick to the hotel business

5 Stars. Please continue.

Excellent

Next chapter at the earliest please

not likable characters ...so who cares about them !

Great Story ! cant wait until son starts milking her big breasts !

Please continue as you have the makings of a brilliant story here.

great bring on the next chapter.

out - F**king - Standing !!!!!

More chapters

Really enjoyed the story. Re: "she was braless and the amount of cleavage she was showing was incredible". I wonder if all the cleavage users would consider 'breasts', 'tits', or something else to admire. Cleavage is the space between breasts. No one is really interested in a space that may easily be manipulated in shape and size by different bras. They are interested in the slope of the breasts, etc. Just a personal quirk.

This is so trash, how do people keep telling you it's good?

She had my cock out in seconds (Joan)

Kay had my cock out in seconds

... Do I need to even say this is just horrible writing?

They were both good gobblers... This feels like something a 10 yr old would write lmfao

Read aot of your stories and have loved them all. Great work!

I guess it’s one of many perks of an author - how big his cock is or tight her pussy is, how in demand he/she is for sex. I’ve read many of your works and I was surprised to see open ratings comments versus many others. Your reasoning was spot on - criticism being negative and all, but criticism is a two-way avenue. Still and all, gave you 4* in spite of re-reading a couple of paragraphs for clarity. Being a Southern redneck and all, I have a touch if Attention Deficit Disorder that meant my PhD took me 12 years to complete. Looking fotward to mire if this series

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