All Comments on 'Mum Makes The First Move Ch. 02'

I was hoping for more, great story.

Great story, as usual.

Just a minor complaint.

In chapter one mum’s age was 51 next birthday,

then at end of end she’s 41.

Maybe a typo, but the older age would have fitted better in the

Outlines of the story. She could still have got pregnant, not unknown for a fifty year old.

This is one of the best stories I've read! From one of my favorite authors! Thanks Jack1107!

After 6 weeks you cannot tell the sex of the child,.. plz be more realistic

You got the 5 stars because it was AWWWsome !!!!!

This story writing is horrible. How have you written so much garbage, and gotten so much love for it? The bar must be pretty low here.

Loved it! Waiting for more in this series.

Courage allows you to crawl through it

How did the mum stick her tongue as far as she could down his pee slit? Wtf is this trash?

ELITE STORY. READ IT 3 TIMES AND I LOVED IT EACH AND EVERY TIME. KUUUUUDOOOOS.

A little disjointed in the first part, but overall a very good story!