by tower1604
Not if you're going to cut a story off right at a crescendo... Jeezus. Dont do that!!
Chapters 1&2 was pretty good BUT don’t keep cutting things off before the climax!
Please keep writing & I hope the next chapters will be here soon!
Read both the chapters, nice but little fast and absence of romance. However please continue and include maternal side also. If possible incorporate other families also with fetishism like lactation, watersports, pregnancy etc. Thanks and have a nice day.
Neither chapter had any romance. 1page chapters; really?
These were really just slam, bam, thank you ma'am.
I probably won't go farther if all of your stories are this way.
I just finished a 27 chapter story with 7 to 14 pages each. That was a real story.
trimmed to the crease of the thighs is fine.
The trimmed {not shaven} tresses, a little darker, or more, is like the frame on a beautiful painting-- it draws the eyes to the beauty. Each woman's pussy shows its own personality-- from a light dusting of fine blonde strands, to dark brown or black curls flowing out from a Treasure Trail. promising a delicious treat of nectar from a properly primed, free flowing slit, waiting to reward the probing tongue bringing it to orgasm(s) with gushing, palate pleasing flavor.
There are many reasons for keeping the Mons and lips tantalizingly hidden, too many to list in a comments post.
Some men, and women, complain about loose strands in their mouth >> A MINOR inconvenience. A soft bristled brush prevents that distraction.
I was already expecting this because of the title of the story. But I'm still totally turned off with mother/son incest. I'm always expecting that someone will eventually write one that is different enough so that I will end up enjoying it. But this one was just as horrible as the others. 1/5