All Comments on 'Mum, Sis and Bro. Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yes

Please write a part fourb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
love to read more

very enjoyable reading, you might add another young girl and of course include sex with mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story line!

I would love to see more chapters as this is a great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent

Would love to hear more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The direction doesn't seem to align with the title.

Mum is the first word in the title, and for the foreseeable future it looks like she's not part of the story. Even if you return to her, it still doesn't seem that it would fit with the prominence suggested by the title. As it is, she wasn't part of most of the story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Not very realistic ...

Many facets of the boating part is just too unrealistic for me to be able to swollow this story.

But that goes more or less for the whole story, including the sexual relations between close relatives, it'is just too "easy". The story reminds me of a daydream or adventure.

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 4 years ago
So she says she is in love with her brother

But she sucks off other guys.....

Ok I think I'm out

tiercenpttiercenptalmost 4 years ago

were u describing Lake Constance?

she loves him but sucks off another guy, no other than her grandpa? How'd that even happen? just walk up to him and say "Yo I wanna suck u off, can I?"

reveals to her, he had sex with mum and she wants to have it with Mabel?

why not mum? I mean would fit the title.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Grammar

Wrong use of ' is overwhelming...

Subject117Subject117over 3 years ago
What the...

How can Beth say she loves her brother and first chance she gets she sucks her grandfather's cock? What kind of love is that??

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 3 years ago
My Comments

Thanks. Good story.

Bgscrn14Bgscrn14almost 3 years ago

Nice story, well written. Exciting 😉

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

This was certainly a whole lot better than the earlier parts. 4/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely super hot, love the the hot fucking and sucking. I just adore cunt, never get enough, the more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed fucker UK.

Anonymous91Anonymous9111 months ago

lost interest when second cock involved.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Wonderful story. 5 stars

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

While you didn't go into detail which I'm personally thankful for you ruined this chapter when you wrote in her giving the other guy a blow job that was too far and now talking about her having sex with Mabel that will also be too far you should have left it between the mom daughter and the son

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

I actually agree with subject117 you can't claim to love someone when the first chance she got was suck someone else's dick that's not love at all I can see how it's going to go she's more than likely going to fuck him though she said she won't and then have nothing to do with the brother anymore

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