All Comments on 'Mummy and Me'

Thanks for sharing

...to be so negative about your first submission, but there's nothing in this story - "Mummy" - who isn't even your mother so where's the incest? - sees you've got a big prick and as soon as you tell her you're a virgin she kneels down and sucks you off? There's no seduction, no erotic tension, no believable characters. Don't bother submitting part 2 unless you've worked a lot harder on it.

Anyone notice that Jack's age is between 18 and 22? Maybe he's still a teenager. For a writer his age this is a fine story, and Jack's to be congratulated for his very creative and very dirty mind. He's got a number of other stories now concerning family fuckers. I'm glad that the negative comments here haven't smothered his creative impulse.

For a first attempt at writing it shows promise. It's like everything in life, the more you do, the better the result.

Pause, take a deep breath....now you can breathe easier, with one story under your belt.

Thanks Don

Is stepmum stepson sex incest. Not blood related so I don't think so. Nice short story