All Comments on 'Mummy and Me'

Is stepmum stepson sex incest. Not blood related so I don't think so. Nice short story

Pause, take a deep breath....now you can breathe easier, with one story under your belt.

Thanks Don

For a first attempt at writing it shows promise. It's like everything in life, the more you do, the better the result.

Anyone notice that Jack's age is between 18 and 22? Maybe he's still a teenager. For a writer his age this is a fine story, and Jack's to be congratulated for his very creative and very dirty mind. He's got a number of other stories now concerning family fuckers. I'm glad that the negative comments here haven't smothered his creative impulse.

...to be so negative about your first submission, but there's nothing in this story - "Mummy" - who isn't even your mother so where's the incest? - sees you've got a big prick and as soon as you tell her you're a virgin she kneels down and sucks you off? There's no seduction, no erotic tension, no believable characters. Don't bother submitting part 2 unless you've worked a lot harder on it.

Thanks for sharing