All Comments on 'Mummy is Very Fussy Pt. 01'

by JoeyKenilworth

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
THIS IS A GREAT START

Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
isn't that

Mummy isn't that some long dead body often wrapped in cloth which is dug up someplace?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well thought out

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start!

I can see this story going in multiple directions, I just clicked on it for a quick read but now I’m excited for the next installment, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
mivf 01

Never end a story or chapter with. "to be continued". That alone deserves a good caning...twelve whacks.

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