All Comments on 'Mummy Made Me'

Isn't that a long dead body for science what a 'mummy' normally commonly known.

It starts okay then rushes to the end. There was potential for a part 2 but that was taken care of in the last paragraph. With some work it could be much better but overall a good start.

more of mummy made me . very hot story . incest and breeding mommy . my god thats hot !!

Not a bad story but there were a lot of typos. Get an editor or at least proof read your work before submitting

I loved the story about how it all came about. Would like to get ahold of that potion.

To the anonymous commenter who made the crack about "mummy" being a long dead person, "mummy" is a common term for a child to call their mother.

If you're going to nitpick, at least pick something worth nitpicking about.