by Kumquatqueen
Not what I expected and, looking at the voting, not what others expected. I assume it’s a build up to what will happen in a sequel in which case the build up is excessively slow. There was detail but the writing was a little ponderous and boring. No excitement. No anticipation of something interesting happening.
It’s the opposite of the hundred percent porn you get in a lot of stories which isn’t necessarily a bad thing. I like a story with a plot and where the sex is incidental but with a reason for it rather than put in for titillation. But I speak as someone who has never pleasured themselves from reading any story on here.
People who enjoyed this story - and those who would have if it included more actual BDSM - may like to read my new story, "Switching at KinkCon".
It features Karen and John again. You wait ages for a proper scene with these characters and then three come along at once...