All Comments on 'Mummy's Boobies'

Dude..This is deep

It is amazing how 2 lines can give a story a completely different feel

I don't think a topic like this could have been handled any better

Loved it

A VERY UNNECESSARY TWIST SPOILED THE MOOD

Great

My 7-yr old writes better than this.

Only you could have made such engaging erotica out of a subject so sensitive. I really enjoyed how you kept the plot simple, and allowed the Son to reveal the Twist, with very little drama.

READ THIS TWICE FOLKS... This story deserves it.there are so many layers to this story,and if you read it again you will notice the buildup to mentioning of the son's real state was perfectly done

this is a bad story

i really hated the dialogue thing

the son being somebody suffering from a disorder was an ever bigger turn off

very poor stuff

Kudos To You For Taking The Risk

Kudos To You For Almost Pulling It Off

THIS WOULD HAVE BEEN SO MUCH MORE THAN A REGULAR SEX STORY HAD YOU TAKEN A LITTLE MORE EFFORT

Something was missing

Maybe you should have started the story focussing on the Son's condition, rather than keeping it for later.

Always been a fan of your work, Mr.brucewayneegypt!

This time you have surpassed my expectations by quite a big margin.

Not only is an erotically right justification given for Mummy's doings, but there is also a very relevant point discussed by suggesting why exactly mummy might have chose her son.

PLEASE DON'T WRITE ANOTHER STORY, BECAUSE YOU REALLY JUST CANNOT WRITE

YOUR IDEAS ARE OKAY, BUT YOUR WRITING IS THE WORST I HAVE EVER COME ACROSS

10 words towards the end in a 3000 words story has the power to demand a totally different perspective. The detail was not a make or break factor to this above average story yet when I read it, I felt stupid for believing this was a very normal story for so long. The suspense has been maintained very well, and very well thought about and executed, and you deserve a praise.

another brilliant effort

What's with the story being told as DIALOGUES? If you are lazy to write a proper story, just don't write!

Wow

I like it.

Definitely need to continue this.. Also, probably after he fucks his mom.... That he confesses that he already fucked his sister, too... It sucks that you always end just before the good part...