All Comments on 'Mum's Accident'

Alright! I'm in!

When is chapter 2 coming?

Great story, love the surprising ending. Your POV change to the voyeur/photographer had me checking…non-binary??? They, them. Then began to realize your intent to NOT use gender-revealing pronouns was genius, confusing, but genius

A very enjoyable read. Waiting for the next part!!!!

I don’t read many 6 page stories but I’m glad I stick with this one. The storyline was well paced and unfolded naturally, and you set it up perfectly for follow up chapters. 5 stars!

your ability to delight and surprise is an ongoing pleasure and this second story in a month after your 3 month lay-off. I await your next offering!!!!

Over 20 years in Homicide says there is no such thing as coincidence(s). This really stretches it.

Not bad needs another part although the idea that Nikki and penny are responsible for the photos is both dumb and smart.... Smart because it is the perfect set up but dumb because it would have made a better and more believed tale if it was someone else..... It would have given the story more longevity if it had been someone else taking the photos because not only is the mother and sons relationship at risk in this but so is Nikki's this isn't something that someone in a law firm would likely do because if ever found out it means their job and license go bye bye exposure to one would also expose the other so that plot doesn't work well

Great story! A little confusing at first, with your use of pronouns. It seemed like it may have been two persons or a couple before realizing it was meant to hide the gender of the photographer. Very clever. I had deduced Penny was the photographer and Nikki's daughter, but was pleasantly surprised Nikki and Joanne were one and the same. Anxiously awaiting the next part of this terrific tale! 5⭐

Rafe

Loved it you need to continue with this story and see how the finally all get together and all of them having sex together three women and two men make an interesting outcome!!!! 5 stars

Another great story well told. Sexy, erotic and sensual. Would love to see a second part!