All Comments on 'Mum's Friend in Need'

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Bullrider14Bullrider14almost 3 years ago

I hope u keep this going. Have Tim and Elin meet up somewhere. Or Amy finds out and keeps it up with Tim

readeralreaderalalmost 3 years ago

Brilliant. Finished in the most unfinished way. On the other hand, we`d love to see where your characters might leed us.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 3 years ago

Agree with Bullrider. Keep it going. I'm good with either way it turns out.

G5902G5902almost 3 years ago

Another one of your fantastic stories — thank you for sharing!!!

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

****Everybody got laid and some got played. Good read very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

I liked this, a well detailed piece, plenty of sex , characters were well described, my only complaint is that as an 18 year old he would have cum very quickly the first couple of times, but being young he could restart time and time again, as young men can… Sods. 😋

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Rob, a retired professional guy who is married, a carer for my wife, so my writing tends to be cathartic. Some of my stories have a wild taste of fantasy, some are based on experience, but the writing helps me. I appreciate many readers are from 'across the pond,' and culture,...