All Comments on 'Murphy's Law'

It seems things are looking pretty good for our little group. There's a first time for everything, but I'm still waiting. Great writing!

5 *s from me. HDK 3.0

Hopefully there will be a sequel!

Was Sam a typo?

It's been a while, happy to give it the five stars it deserves.

This made my eyes water, it gave me goose bumps and stirred my libido.

This is excellently written, great characters, and just warm fuzzy and lovely.

Thank you for this gift.

Merry Christmas!

Be well & keep writing,

FDD

@Anonymous Sam was Michael's sister. Did you read or skim.

@Bebop3- Yes people actually name their children Michael and George, there is nothing wrong with them.

Sorry Randi, I loved this story, I keep thinking that George might make one more appearance, but just as glad he didn't

Thanks for writing!

Will place a bid and a plea for more of a awesome story line! :-)

he always thought Murphy was an optimist, TK U MLJ LV NV

You are an amazing and prolific writer! You have given us all a wonderful Christmas present. Thank you, please never stop writing and being the creative person that you are.

Sharing was caring, after the feisty little bitch Murphy strong-armed her poor innocent Mom Reilly.

Very hot story! It's a shame it ended when it did, I wanted to find out if he got them both pregnant...

(Yes, that's you Powersworder) Any story of this ilk, you just know some douche/s will be first up in the comments with, "Ooh, I hope one or both of them end up pregnant." Or, "I hope they're all knocked up in the next chapter." Jesus, give it a fucking rest!! Better yet, why don't you all get together, buy a bunch of land out back of Bumfuck, AZ, and all live together, having each other's ass babies.

Anyway, well done BR - another fine collection of words! (4.5)

Believe me, dickweed, it's much easier for me to delete your ass than for you to leave your shit. I can do this for years.

Wow, what a bizarre overreaction to an innocent comment!

I enjoyed the story and really liked the characters... I just wanted to know how it worked out for them in the long term. Having children is a natural part of a relationship and Michael is now having bareback sex with two fertile women who are both in love with him. If Michael spends the rest of his life with them, isn't it inevitable that Murphy and Reilly would eventually want to have his kids?

Loved the story, another erotic feel-good! Your talent compliments this site Thank You.

Regarding the 'pregnancy' issues.. So what would be bad about that? from the character descriptions it looks like it could be a very good thing so long as Michael stays around and in his current condition I don't see that happening! Great start to a new year!

Reilly didn't get farmed out to the obligatory last minute ship like so often happens when the daughter of a single mom finds mister right. Making sure all the single characters end up partnered is a seriously annoying trope. If they're not with the protagonist we don't need to know who they partnered up with, even if they were with or might have flirted with the protagonist.

Murphy didn't discover a younger Michael so her mom could ride off into the sunset with the protagonist, which is the other common path for single mom stories.

Since the "bang all the chicks" stories are always over the top it was good to see Michael taking a pass on Murphy's friends (even if I probably would have enjoyed it anyway).

however, turned off by the comments from the pro-pregnancy fetishists.

With your LW and Romance stories I may just have to break my rule and peruse your incest stories. Another male fantasy lived out in words. Signed: BTW

Another 5 stars, it is a male fantasy and a very good one.

I will make one global edit and save it in my collection.

A very nice fantasy. Very well done.

Creating such funny situations and great description of sex are your forte. Good fun.

Sweet story.

Hi Randi.

Another one of your erotic masterpieces. Very well done, hot and very smooth. You have a special knack for this. What is the part of creative imagination in these descriptions?

BJ

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Non binary incest is drawn to be so delightful in a non family values biome. Like finding your soul mate its mythological happy ever after quality that I've never experienced or saw in real life. Fiction is mind expanding. ( if not mildly disturbing)

Happy Happy Happy story.

Hi Randi.

Third reading. Here is what I said about one year ago when I first read it. And I stand by it even today. "Here is another one of your erotic masterpieces. Very well done, hot and very smooth. You have a special knack for this. What is the part of creative imagination in these descriptions?"

BJ

good story, though the ending seemed incomplete.

Confusing. Usually the goal seems to be compatible 'soulmates'. Polyamory and incest must be an acquired taste like BDSM or gender preference. At what point does promiscuity become too much? (Like swinging and indulging in drugs and alcohol?)