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AnomolousCowherdover 11 years agospelling isn't the issue
I suspect that this would mostly pass a spell-checker but, as others have pointed out, "putted" probably isn't a verb appropriate to the action in the story and muscles may get sore but they rarely soar.
An editor would be for your next shot. And a bit more patience (or perhaps patients?) in letting the story develop.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt may not be the past tense of "to put"
but "putted" certainly exists as a word.
Anonymousover 11 years agoSpelling still counts
The poor spelling spoiled my enjoyment of a decent story.
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