All Comments on 'Muse - The Proposal 1'

Very interesting beginning chapter.

Please continue, great start

@mstbdscrt1957. It started out with me trying to write pornography, but the characters took it elsewhere. I hope you can muster the patience for the (very) slow build toward their more erotic endeavours.

Keep it up.

@Anonymous No worries, I already completed the novel, but translating it to English proved to be a greater challenge than expected. Still, the work is almost done and I'll be publishing chapters the coming weeks, as fast as Literotica allows me.

I feel hooked already

Very nice

Your set up is terrific, you lure us into the web, too!

What fun to start out with verbal sparring. It appears Melina is a strong woman who will go to great lengths to resolve her dilemma of her husband's wanderings.

A very entertaining first chapter.I am looking forward to what follows.