All Comments on 'Muse 3 - Forced Desire 1'

by oncemorewithfeeling

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cmj711 over 1 year ago

Well done.

I'd like some other characters brought in to, teach, humiliate & share her journey.

Anonymousover 1 year ago

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oncemorewithfeeling over 1 year agoAuthor

@cmj711 Thank you. As for other characters, there will be, but you'll have to be very patient for those in the shadows that appear on her painting.

EGRI 10 months ago

I have posted my usual , and warranted, five star rating. I am enjoying your work and believe it warrants a more complete and thoughtful response after I've finished the entire work.

I love the progression and the attention to detail by Damian, he noticed the wet stool, and his perpetual requirements of her choosing. I have my thoughts for how this all ends and I am enjoying the ride to get there.

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I wanted to write a pornographic short, but the characters decided differently. I made this account to publish the novel it turned into. This novel is not for you, nor was it my original intention you would read it. Muse is partly based on my personal voyage of discovery rende...

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