All Comments on 'Muse 3 - Forced Desire 3'

Thank you for taking me on this journey.

I'm enjoying all of the colors & dimensions & sexual torments ;)

Darker? I’m a little worried.

And thank you for letting me know all the hard work that went into it was not in vain. Much appreciated!

Currently my favourite story on here. Real depth to your writing.

Enjoying it immensely, don’t keep us waiting to long for the second part please.

*****

Just, Wow!

Now finish it, the easy part is done.

Excellent! Thank you for writing such a compelling story.

I'm very much looking forward to more.

Bravo!! The first half has clearly created a new creature. The introduction of contemporary towering heels is a nice image. Given Melina's ballet training I am sure she has grace and a finely turned leg.

The story of Louise is but a thinly veiled introduction of the multiple partner experience as shown in her artwork. She can now check off the box listing pain leading to subspace.

At least I finally knew one of the mentioned artists. A Titian is a nice little bauble to have in your possession.

I look forward to your second half.

Brilliant

I’ve given myself permission to respond to this highly erotic story. Please, please continue to write.