All Comments on 'Muse - The Proposal 2'

I enjoy your story and writing, but am confused by the chapter order. This one says it is part 2, but it is the 6th chapter uploaded. Part one is posted twice with different titles. The last chapter had them in a dungeon, but this chapter occurs at an earlier date, before she did the painting.

Finally succeeded in rearranging the titles and order so it makes sense. Many thanks to Laurel for their assistance.

Great character development. The dress and collar are as much of a threat as a challenge. I look forward to Melina's hidden desire to wear the dress and collar.

I hope no one complains about the lack of sex at this point. There is a lot being exposed and keeping the threat, risk and challenge being delayed.

Enjoyable