All Comments on 'Mutatius Ch. 01'

I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop.

I like the story. It's pretty well written and promises to be engaging. I look forward to reading more of it.

Great fun!

Pleasantly surprised with this story. Looking forward to the character and world development!

For your first attempt at writing, well done. Very well done. You should keep writing and I'm excited to (hopefully) see where the story goes. Honestly, aside from a few typos that are hardly worth mentioning, your writing style was easy to read and your story was engaging from the start. You have presented us with some interesting characters within some nice world-building. I'm curious to see what will be revealed as the plot develops. 5 stars.

Great start!! Not sure you will be harem or finding his love. Just remember. Tom does not share! !

You need to continue this story. Tom will eventually want to get home and the other Fairies might want to try some of Tom's sexual magic.

Well written so far and hoping for more

I can't believe this is your 1st time writing a story X story excellent job I thoroughly enjoyed it and can hardly wait to read more

Love it. I hope you plan to finish this story