All Comments on 'Mutual Benefits Ch. 04'

You manage to bring clarity to the insanity of teen lust ... and social theater. I suspect my initial reaction to impending sexual activity was a maelstrom of synaptic confusion. But then, that’s what makes your story involving! Thank you.

Another great chapter to a great story

Quit your day job. Get this out quicker!!!!

Really enjoying the way you are writing this!!! More...please!

Once again, amazing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

These are always incredible, can't wait to see the next chapter

This is a good story line - I am enjoying it

looking forward to the next instalment.

Thank you

Love this story

This is excellent! Never before in my perusing of stories on Lit have I felt motivated to go back and re-read earlier chapters before plunging into the latest installment. I wanted to savor every drop so went back and re-read the first 3 before reading this one..... Good work. I agree with anonymous below, who said you should quit your day job and finish this....;)

I must admit I'm very puzzled by the overall low rating your stories are receiving. This is SO much better than other stories I've read that received a much higher rating... alas, there's no accounting for taste...

Thank you for not rushing this, I really enjoy the slow build and yet arousing chapters.

Really liking the slow build-up and not just having them fuck like rabbits. As always, a great chapter and hoping to see the next chapter soon.

Man you are awesome. Just don't stop but take your time and don't compromise.

One of the best stories I ever came across. Please don't leave it halfway

Amazing story! Love the realistic growth of the characters, and that they didn't rush to the sex. Can't wait for the next chapter!💥

When is the next one coming

I really hope this isn’t the end of this story but real enjoying it.

Please continue

I really hope you continue this story.

please keep going

Your story is interesting and arousing, please continue the story, lovely characters.

We need the next chapter its amazingg

please continue please

Keep going plssss

More i want more i feel so horny but am unable to cum coz i dont have ur stories!!!!

Agree with the others - please keep going with this story.

Waiting for the next chapter since a month, please continue to write

It was a nice story so far.... hope not another of series where the writer vanishes in middle of a nice build up !

Can u give us an update on when the next part is gonna be out? :)

I sure hope this is not the end.

Normally, I don't like "slow" too much. But this is (maybe somewhat optimistic-utopic) character and relations development that I really enjoy. And it is headed for "good guy wins in the end", seemingly...

Damn, im already mad at Kevin for fucking this up and it hasn't even happened.

really loving your story!

Not just sexy but intelligently written. You capture the drama of high school! I look forward to the next chapters!

Great story, one of the top five I’ve read here.

Would like to suggest, (for easier reading), to separate the lines, when one character speaks, the other replies.

Again thanks for all the time and effort you’ve put into this.

You have done such a great job up to now, going slow, but still getting to the next level. Quinn's personality, his patience, is remarkable...the girls are gonna love him, SSSOOO MUCH!!

Taylor is doing well herself; she is patient with Quinn, teaching him about the group dynamics, how his comments are interpreted by the others...Morgan is STILL a mystery, but I have a feeling that her world is turned over because of Quinn and his way of treating her...calling her out, yet being nice as he can be. I think Morgan is weirded out by Quinn's shy demeanor, yet he stands up to her in a way that is attractive to her...she just hides it by not talking. That is gonna go "somewhere"...interesting, I think.

Kevin, the 'popular' brother....hhhmmm...will have to see how he acts...hopefully not too much of a douché...

Such a slow burn.