All Comments on 'Mutual Benefits Ch. 06'

beggars can't be choosers.

THIS IS SOOO GOOOD. I’ve been here since chapter 4 and i really like this. The wait for each chapter is totally worth it. Keep it up.

Great storyline…. Hope to read the next chapter soon

Good story, just wish you could submit the chapters a bit quicker. Sometimes having to go back an re-read to refresh what is going on with the story. Other wise very good!!

Another cliffhanger

Bro this is such a cliffhanger lol..post quickly ..

The suspense is at an all time high. Please release the next chapter soon! Thanks

Excellent

You’ve got me hooked. Lots of opportunities here to expand your series beyond the two main characters and develop sub-plots that could, maybe focus in the few other personalities highlighted so far.

Yep. Jen to see the next chapter… and the next after that… please.

Ok, I'm hooked. Great story so far. Keep up the good work. I'm glad Quinn is being more social now.

This is so good! Waiting for more!!

author has to figure out the diff between to lay and to lie. diff verbs. look them up.

there´s more, i just can´t remember...

i´m done. can´t stand junior high english.

one star.

Amazes me the amount grammar police on a adult fantasy/erotic story site.

I am hooked as well!!!

Such sort of suspence is not even found in bollywood movies

*Began reading part 1 not knowing it was part of a series*

"A nice little story with a slow burn....cool."

*Realizes its a series*

"Well damn....in for a long haul."

*Gets to this ending currently*

"DAMMIT!!!"

Overall, I can enjoy this series. Characters are interesting and Quinns perspective does actively influence how he interacts and describes them.

great stuff! needs light editing, and it's a really good story!

All in all, liking the story so far but this character is kind of a little bitch.

Okay, yeah...Milo...what a "cypher"...transsexual, and in the middle of the drama...AND, SSSOOO NOSY...??

Quinn...maybe messed up here...will soon see, won't we??dd

Loved comparing high school to the political entanglements of WWI. So true (I hated high school)!

good high school or even early college drama. it seems that the popular girls are afraid to admit an unpopular person into their lives. typical at any age, environment. Taylor is going to break his heart and cause physical "grief" from Joel or Bryce

Binged the first six chapters and I'm thoroughly enjoying this coming of age fic! Good luck writing in the future!

you have my attention

This is where it all went to shit. Don't read after this chapter, you will be sorely disappointed.