by BashfulScribe
I just hope that Quinn fucks Morgan and decides he’ll stick to Taylor instead. I’m so fucking invested in this story that I feel like my mom watching novelas. I don’t care how it happens but you better make Quinn and Taylor end up as BF and GF and make them have penetrative sex next chapter. Good work dude amazing story
You better not waste the momentum that Quinn and Taylor have. Don’t just make them say goodbye after all they did
Bro the story has been good but Quinn’s man up
Moment better be epic because I just hate how walked over he gets
Can't wait for the next one! You better have him not accept Taylor using him and not being with him totally!! <3 you should really try to publish this!!
I’m not exactly sure where it came from but I really liked that Morgan and Quinn might have something going on! It’s a spot of wholesomeness amidst the past few chapters’ intrigue and drama
I don't know what I expected when I first started reading, but the smut has been on point, and much more impressively is that the story is actually really compelling. Each of your characters actually feels like a real person, and I enjoyed reading about how you make the setting a lot more complex and subvert the stereotypical movie tropes (e.g. in your story the Valedictorian is also a Jock).
Personally I'm rooting for Quinn x Morgan, b/c it seems like they both have a genuine connection (they spent 2 hrs talking and this is pretty much their first time talking), plus Taylor is kind of putting up some red flags (hiding her bf). I also hope that after his date w/ Morgan he stops hooking up with Taylor, because Morgan seems nice and it would be really wholesome for Quinn and Morgan to end up with a healthy and happy relationship.
Anyways overall great stuff, this smut has a better romance than some actual books I've read, so I'm looking forwards to more!
Honestly I’ve never been more frustrated that this story wasn’t written years ago. Because now I’m invested and I have to wait for new chapters
I devoured this story, its so good! I hope Quinn gets to be with Morgan in the end but i also hope he fucks taylors brain out before that.
Talk about a plot twist, I never knew that Morgan actually had a crush on him
U ruined the story. U can see he isn't submissive. Why did u ruin the story give a person a warning next time
Yes...complicated...that is how this story is ending up...AND confusing, at times...
Joel and Taylor...weird dynamic, that...are they REALLY dating, or is there more to this we have yet to see; "open" dating relationship, at their age...seems out of step...and the comment about Taylor not being able to trust guys...how they cheat all the time...
Quinn..."Bless His Soul"...he is learning life, coming out of being sheltered at home, plus his own personality....BUT, I see him being more than any SUBMISSIVE to any of these people. His CHARACTER is strong, he is thoughtful and feeling about what is going on. I "think" he and Morgan are on track...we will see...
On, to Chapter 4...
Not looking forward to him adopting her "everyone is open in high school" philosophy, it will fuck him in the end and hurt the one girl that honestly liked him. Also, Kevin needs to just come out of the closet.
Meh. Somewhat confusing. Not into the whole dominate/submit thing, especially when one of the people really isn't but is written to look that way as a plot point. Also quite a few things written into the story that adds nothing. For example Milo being trans. Seems like the author was checking off boxes to be woke. Now if Kevin is revealed as gay, then it will be super patronizing. And one more thing, I'm not sure where the author went to high school, but I can tell you that a lot of what is written does not happen or is at least not common at all at most schools. Artistic license or dramatization I guess.
Honestly the story was going great until this new development. I'm still going to keep reading because I think you're a good writer, but I'm not a fan of Taylor being revealed as a manipulator who likes to control and lie to her friends
This is amazing, just keeps getting better and better. All the characters have real depth to them and are completely understandable, especially when they're screwing up and/or being selfish. Taylor is such a realistically layered character, and the way the drama has unfolded just rings so true. What a page turner!
Crawl, Good Boy, Mistress. Dump her as soon as school ends or Joel starts shit. OR end the study help in front of her friends
Well this is getting interesting. Taylor is such a complex, interesting and somewhat disgusting (to me) character. I wonder if all this will get Quinn to grow into a greater or lesser person. He is just an easily manipulated wimp just starting on the road of discovery of life and people.