All Comments on 'Mutual Masturbation Pt. 02'

by martin_shecter1971

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AtrampboyAtrampboyover 2 years ago

Loved it! Looking forward to the groups next adventure

RockyBoy67RockyBoy67over 2 years ago

Excellent! Looking forward to more of their adventures!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Premise still good.

Still lacks needed details. Too much going on. Needs to concentrate on fewer people's involvement/actions.

Four stars.

NudistDavidNudistDavidover 1 year ago

This was an excellent follow-up to the first one. Again, I love the subject of mutual masturbation. I thought this was well written, and loved the way the story developed, leading to the fantastic threesome ... I also liked the way you showed the boyfriend voyeuring for awhile in a different time sequence ... I came while reading it ... I'm certainly looking forward to the next one ... Quite and interesting little group!

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