by BlueStarGrrrl
Very much enjoyed your story, your style has a keen sense of the moment and your not quite so... innocence.
Now I've got to read the others. Thank you for sharing.
it needs some more detail and more to the story tell us what happened on the ride home
It was a little short, but I thought it was erotic. Perhaps a few more details would have made it better. I'm sure we can all use our imagination about what happened on the ride back to the baby sitter's home.