All Comments on 'My Angel Ch. 01'

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kwiksilver9kwiksilver912 months ago

This story rocks. Can't believe it's your first one!

socielitesocielite12 months ago

more, want more

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

It's a great story, I think it would be perfect if nashea became Angel's sugarmommy.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Plz update I feel bad for angel, I hope he’s okay

NotmanenoughNotmanenough12 months ago

good job on the story, i like that Angel is confused and not brainded at the end of the storry, it leave space for future developement.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Please make another chapter

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

5 stars! You sure this is your first story? It's really good! I can't wait for more.

MCJOHN11708MCJOHN1170811 months ago

Second chapter please! Great story, loved how unique the ending to this one was in comparison to so many other dubcon/forced into a weird situation with a futa type stories.

Ladd_RussoLadd_Russo11 months ago

Loved this! Hope to see a second chapter with Nashea trying and failing to find anyone like Angel again, and going back to him, this time in a more romantic (if still dominating) way. And of course Angel starting to get a better life for himself, maybe by Nashea helping him out.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Actually found this pretty well-written! I guess some of the emotional reactions from the characters were a bit contrived, but the protagonists were really relatable and the kind of complicated plot was managed with skill. You might deserve a place in the "canon" of good futa-on-femboy writers on this site

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