All Comments on 'My Angel Ch. 02'

by SmilingSpider

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great episode! Can't wait for more!

RorurkaRorurka11 months ago

Good stuff ! Can't Wait for the next chapter

burkdmburkdm11 months ago

I want Nashae to *really* fill Angel up like a balloon. :3

SMDBSMDB11 months ago

wow.. waiting for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice work Spider who Smiles, for me

Angel is a very endearing character, an underdog and I always pull for them to ultimately win in their lives. I hope you treat him properly and eventually finds happiness in his life.

Can’t hardly wait for you to continue with the next part of his saga…5 ❤️

Dare

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This story has a lot of potential. Waiting for when she finally admits she has feelings for him.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I hope angel gets a happy ending with her (I mean a loving relationship).

HolyHollowHolyHollow11 months ago

This is great! Nashea and Angel play off really well with each other and Angel's vulgar language doesn't come off as overtly crude but a charming quirk.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent!

Please moarrr!

HreulfgarHreulfgar11 months ago

Sooo good. Can't wait for ch3.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

So good excited for the next chapter hope for a happy ending

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A little cruel I guess, but at the same time, so so hot! I'd very much like to see more instalments

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Really nice hope chapter 3 cones out soon

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please update!

GigglingskullGigglingskull10 months ago

I love the story. Hope to eventually read a next part

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Can’t wait for part 3 going to be amazing

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Plzzz update

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Loved it. It was really god. Wish I read this sooner can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Cant wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The worst feeling is reading such a good story and then gradually giving up hope of a continuation. I've read it the day it was posted, more than 7 months ago. Author, if you're reading this, please, at least give an answer if this will ever be continued, I'm tired of constantly checking this website for the new chapter.

SmilingSpiderSmilingSpider3 months agoAuthor

I don’t know if anyone will even see this but I just want to say I will continue it. I’ll explain my shitty reason for taking FOREVER in the next chapter. It should be up in a month MAX.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I saw your comment. And I am glad!! We need more of this hotness

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Pls for fucks sake vet rid of the bitchy horrible attitude of her, none really wants that, it just sucks to read, the futa is all dominant and agressive and uncaring, the guy is girly pathetic and cant stsnd up for himself, read it like a hundred times looking for actuall good stories, its all the same, YAWN!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I'm so happy that this story will continue, finally my wait has paid off.

Lord PhoenixLord Phoenixabout 1 month ago

Would like to see this continue

MCJOHN11708MCJOHN1170821 days ago

Really liked both parts! Can't wait for part 3.

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A bit more character interaction would be nice to see between Angel and Nashea tho, and I really hope Nashea ends up mellowing out a bit, that being said, given the hints that she seemingly does care about him to some extent, like how she stopped him from hurting himself, or how she embraced him during the act in a protective manner, I have little doubt that we may see that side of her.

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Less force and more gentle coaxing is what I'd like to see in future chapters in general If I'm being honest, and given how much depth the author has given to them both, it'd be quite disapointing if it ends up with her just breaking down his will with next to zero character growth given to her.

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4/5 so far with the potential of being a 5/5, easily. However the series seems to have gone a tad dormant, so if it doesn't end up being finished, then its easily a 3/5, good noncon fap material, with untapped potential to be an amazing story.

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