by SmilingSpider
Nice work Spider who Smiles, for me
Angel is a very endearing character, an underdog and I always pull for them to ultimately win in their lives. I hope you treat him properly and eventually finds happiness in his life.
Can’t hardly wait for you to continue with the next part of his saga…5 ❤️
Dare
This story has a lot of potential. Waiting for when she finally admits she has feelings for him.
This is great! Nashea and Angel play off really well with each other and Angel's vulgar language doesn't come off as overtly crude but a charming quirk.
A little cruel I guess, but at the same time, so so hot! I'd very much like to see more instalments
Loved it. It was really god. Wish I read this sooner can’t wait for the next chapter
The worst feeling is reading such a good story and then gradually giving up hope of a continuation. I've read it the day it was posted, more than 7 months ago. Author, if you're reading this, please, at least give an answer if this will ever be continued, I'm tired of constantly checking this website for the new chapter.
I don’t know if anyone will even see this but I just want to say I will continue it. I’ll explain my shitty reason for taking FOREVER in the next chapter. It should be up in a month MAX.
Pls for fucks sake vet rid of the bitchy horrible attitude of her, none really wants that, it just sucks to read, the futa is all dominant and agressive and uncaring, the guy is girly pathetic and cant stsnd up for himself, read it like a hundred times looking for actuall good stories, its all the same, YAWN!
I'm so happy that this story will continue, finally my wait has paid off.
Really liked both parts! Can't wait for part 3.
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A bit more character interaction would be nice to see between Angel and Nashea tho, and I really hope Nashea ends up mellowing out a bit, that being said, given the hints that she seemingly does care about him to some extent, like how she stopped him from hurting himself, or how she embraced him during the act in a protective manner, I have little doubt that we may see that side of her.
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Less force and more gentle coaxing is what I'd like to see in future chapters in general If I'm being honest, and given how much depth the author has given to them both, it'd be quite disapointing if it ends up with her just breaking down his will with next to zero character growth given to her.
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4/5 so far with the potential of being a 5/5, easily. However the series seems to have gone a tad dormant, so if it doesn't end up being finished, then its easily a 3/5, good noncon fap material, with untapped potential to be an amazing story.