by touchmate
This is probably a more beautiful,loving story than the first chapter. Perhaps Padma can visit her parents more often than every 10 years. Wonderful sensitivity, intimacy and gentleness.
you need to retitle this story so readers don't have to go looking for the first chapter. on sites like this ALL chapters of a series HAVE to have the same title with numbers or subtitles to tell what order to read them in. do yourself and all readers a favor and retitle this and do it right from now on.
This is more of a love story than lust. Like the sensitive way you tell your stories. I particularly loved the ending of this story and very happy for Padma. Keep going, write a sequel about Gita too.