by whimsicalrelaxed
Welcome to the world of Authors. I enjoyed your story and hope you continue writing. wendy
very well written, sexy and cuts off just at the right time leaving the rest to the imagination... well done for your first attempt... Keep writing.
I enjoyed your short story. You kept it realistic and erotic. Its a good job of teasing and you left the rest to the imagination. nice writing.
That was hot and delicious and well written too. Can't wait for your next one.
Great story. I loved the interplay between what you were fantasizing, what you were actually doing to yourself and the monologue directed toward the subject of your letter. Your story has a wonderful depth and is far from the cliche. I'm looking forward for more of your writing.
Very sensual and the image of you masturbating...well, let's just say I had to do that myself!
Maybe one day I'll tell you who this is.
*w*
Mmmm...how erotic sweetie :) I'm so glad I finally got around to reading one of your stories. I'll have to check out the other one now!
Erica :)