by starlifter99
Can see where this line is going and waiting wating for part two.Love your story sujects,adding you to my favourites list
Shame you didn't continue this story - original and pretty hot. The writing wasn't crappy but I thought it was a bad place to leave it hanging without adding another chapter soon after.
Could have added another page; I'm sure there was more than just one night! While I'm at it,... Left everyone hanging.... out where Jordan and King always do- good job! And!, excellent punctuation, spelling; good breakage of topics... almost as if I edited it, myself!
Dan
But I left it alone as it seemed incomplete. I see there's a part 2 so we'll see. I will say though that this part was fairly well written. Ronnie W.
for the cumming action. (yes, very bad.) Waiting for additional chapters to appear.