All Comments on 'My Aunt & I'

... it escalated and plateaued too fast. You need to build it up a little slower and take time in the descriptions and details.

3/5 for a nice read.

I love older women; they know what they want. And, you don't have to teach them how....

'just before noon I headed over to my aunt's. When I arrive I find my aunt dressed in a skirt, blouse and heels. I assume she was headed out to some holiday occasion '

You went from past tense to present tense and back again. It would have been easier to just write 'when I arrived' and 'I assumed'.

It makes it easier to read.

You need more description in the story. Were they stockings, what color?

Suspender belt, silk or satin and what color etc.

Take your time. Reread the story.