All Comments on 'My Aunt's Gift'

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Omart57Omart57over 4 years ago
Wow-

you called it right, I almost pulled back from this story. I'm very glad that I didn't!

Wonderful story, five stars and added to favorites!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very interesting story. I hope your going to continue. I would like to continue reading about the quest his aunt gave him to become an Elf Lord.

swfb70swfb70over 4 years ago

needs a chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing Story

Just amazing. More, please, soon.

Lone_HawkLone_Hawkover 4 years ago

What a wonderful story. I too would like you to continue this one. There is much to be told about his future. Five stars!

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 4 years ago

great story loved the history in it. would be great if you continued it for at least a couple more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Outstanding Story!

Truly a wonderful story. You are a very gifted writer to share such a unique story. Please write additional chapters.

DOS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story but....

I don't care where someone is from, I would have picked a better name for the aunt than Asta. What was the nephew's name again? A man with a woman's body except for having a dick, is just a little to strange for me.

madtowncunilinguistmadtowncunilinguistover 4 years ago

The realism and detail in the story, as well as the vivid portrayal of the boy's angst makes this IMHO one of the best stories on this site. I particularly like the details of the skiing and sauna. It's written so convincingly that I found myself wondering repeatedly if elements of the story have some factual personal basis.

There are very few stories I've had the desire to read more than once, and I've enjoyed this one several times now! Thank you!

PS you are an excellent writer! and editor! I found only one grammatical mistake in the whole story - there's one place where you use your instead of you're

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 4 years ago

Superb! beautifully written, and a very different slant from the usual, run of the mill incest tales. Well thought out and thought provoking story. Easy 5 Stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Slow start

I thought you would never get to the story. My opinion too long intro and repeating things. Had to force myself to get to the story and once I got there I liked your style.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful

Beautiful bodies, beautiful sex, beautiful incest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it!

A Beautiful story, well written addressing often misunderstood, often painful situations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5* entertainment....

Well written and had me rivetted most of the time.

Good descriptions of little known things, which I appreciated.

I never look for follow ups, only interested in the build up to a first encounter.

This story was one of the best ones I recall.

Hoping to stumble across any other of your works as I read through a search for "aunt" under the incest category.

Well done indeed๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Best story ever. I really hope that you will continue Aunt Asta and Elf Lord's story.

madtowncunilinguistmadtowncunilinguistabout 1 year ago

Wow, what a great story! THANK YOU for all of the writing and editing work you put into this. I really appreciate your great writing. This is the second or third time reading this outstanding story , as I was motivated to read it again now that I see there is a sequel. I really enjoyed the details about skiing and sauna, and the depiction of the sweet and loving sex with Asta. Keep up the good work please! <3

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