All Comments on 'My Awakening'

by bdavidson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice

That was a beautiful story. Very warm and believable. I'd love to hear more. :)

Equus7Equus7about 5 years ago
Hot initiation

I loved your story. The youthful curiosity was believable and erotic. Reminded me of when I was sooo horny as a kid.

You’re a good writer!

TeenTopTeenTopabout 5 years ago
Enlightenment

This story explains plausibly how a young guy gets addicted to man-on-man sex. It's a logical process from mutual jack-off und and suck-off with a friend to receiving the cock of another friend at both ends. The awakening is triggered by gay literature and voyeurism which refers to an era before kids watched porn in the internet. I can, however, not believe that a boy should have these first experiences at the age of 18. Nevertheless a very nice contribution.

MuscleaddictMuscleaddictabout 5 years ago
Not quite credible

I enjoyed this story, but I stumbled at the naivety of the main characters. How can a 18 year old man not have seen anything like cocksucking before?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Been there

I have been in real life version of the first part of your story, still play with myself thinking about it many years later

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