by richardbedfordwhite
Hopefully the women will become infected with an incurable sexually transmitted disease!
Another story that falls far short of your usual standards. Was this an attempt at humor, or just a bad idea?
no real drama. just a bunch of sluts getting away with adultery
Please never use the word mulatto again. It's a pejorative from 100 years ago comparing a mixed race person to a mule
Definitely, without any question the very least entertaining story you have ever written. It actually seem like the story was written by someone else. Here's hoping to a quick and permanent return to your more normal style. I won't bother rating this out of respect for all your dtories that I have enjoyed.
Seriously think before writing & ask yourself why are you writing this story.
Another shitty stupid story from this cuck loving author.
No point to this story, it just meanders to nothing.
Go back to your day job please you suck at this.
Scores 1/5
It's kinda like a BYOB brothel...(bring your own bitch)
4 stars...Thanks
If I am wrong someone please correct me, but was this another simpering cuck story?
Once I realized who the author was I needed to hurl up my late lunch, which, btw, was a really good one, and that was a 180 from this story Im guessing.
This may help out your writing efforts (and there is no fee for this info)..... if the after dinner fart you share with those around is a "Whoa dude that was freaking rank!!!" try and make your story a bit higher quality than that fart. You've not managed it yet with any of them, but that was before I gave you such highly valued advice.
You ARE welcome.
4* - but would have liked to given it 3.5 - interesting setup to what could have been a good story.
5* new and different. Who cares about the cheating? It's a great business model! Way to go Marge!