All Comments on 'My Bear'

OMG!! I loved your story!! I came twice wishing it was me Steve was plowing with his big cock. I love the feel of a big cock filling me with cum. Don't you just love the feeling of cum running down your legs after being well fucked? I know I do!!

The only problem is the grammar. I loved that he was straight. I just hoped he got fucked by more people. Good job.

Loved your story, got off twice while reading it!!

I have lusted after this very type of experience my entire life. What I wouldn't give to be made love to like the way this young college guy was by such an erotic and dominant hung stud. However, having been happily married to a hot wife for years I know this will never happen for me in real life. That is why I loved your story. It allows me to live this very fantasy once again. The way you described him being kissed and feeling like a woman being fucked put me over the top! Thank you and please write more of the very same.

FUCKING IMMENSE!!!

This was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. I love when he made the guy fuck himself on his dick! So frickin HOT!!!

That is a damn hot story. I know I am going to be jerking off to it tonite fantasizign that I'm in your shoes being fucked hard and deep by a big dicked bear. bartsavagewood@yahoo.com

I love this story so much. I read it all of the time. Please write something new like this one!

but you need to edit better because I kept getting 'thrown out' of the story with silly grammatical mistakes or words that didn't belong.

But otherwise a great little story

shit this is hot

What a brilliant erotic story by this young writer. Like all the others here I found it exciting and longed to be in his place. Planning my next trip to Yellowstone as I write. I love bears, they are so sexy and manly and I am totally aroused. Well done fellow bear lover!

FIRST, get over your grammar issues! (He spells 'since' as 'sense'.) And there are others. PLEASE DO SO! I promise you a wild hairy sexy ride. The writer has phenomenal talent for imagery. You will feel every lustrous chesthair against your body. The overall story is good. It holds the emotion, sexual tension and actions in place. Electric erotic sex will keep you erect. You will relive and desire this story for many years.

Super Story... Good characters and scene development. Great erotic narrative. Would love to see more chapters and / or his next encounter. After such a hot initiation, there is no way he could go back to being straight..!! (I know..!!)

a spell/grammar check would eliminate a lot of unnecessary distraction.

Erotic

Being going back to this story for years now, and never fail to blow a load when he's flipped onto his back legs spread and fucked like a woman.

Great story. Too bad he never had another hot time with cocks.

should stayed forever.