by FdomMsub
must say this is one the my favourite two stories of yours. Yuna and Tom are both wonderful. Would prefer it if Yuna being stronger, and not wanting to,rely on Tom
It’s a long story but a good read, the progression made sense and concluded marvelously.
What an amazingly good story, it caught me off guard as I thought I’ve read these stories with similar scenarios before and there wasn’t much to expand on. This kept me reading until all 10 pages were read. Great writing and thank you.
Really great writing as always loved how you wrote a romance story as the foundation made it all the hotter especially the obsession stuff 2nd best story so far for me only surpassed by mommys little slave though the writing here was better looking forward to more great stuff
So f***ing disgusting... and I like it. Little disappointed he lost his virginity so soon, think she could've stayed out of penetration perhaps completely.
Will there be part 2?
Like I imagine way to add into this story is to have multiple mistresses using her at same time... would've been more exciting though if he still was kept virgin to add to extra humiliation to all of this.
I guess this was aimed to be more about story of between the two and the passion they shared... I just personally would've gone slightly different route and kept the romance story shorter. Still, 9/10
Amazing story. What's the next story's theme?
Boss & Employee?
Sister & Brother?
Therapist & Patient?
Whatever it is I'm sure you'll make it hot, romantic & filled with femdom.
Your writing is insane the way you built up that story I am literally in shock. I don’t think I have ever read a story as good as this were you felt so connected to each character. You should really be writing full time wether it’s erotica like this or more traditional stories. Just wow. Plz keep writing every one of your writing have been amazing.
Great story but it was too long. Love stories of dirty ass licking and shit play with diarrhea. And I love Asian women and would love to be shit on and forced to clean a dirty stinky ass.
This was just wonderfull I can't even writing something like this it was literally sooooo good , wish I could get more of this stuff from you
This is, without exaggeration, the best story I have ever read. For me, the most emotional was the second part (in particular, it is my favorite). Usually, after such an incident, which is arranged by the main character, the other character stops treating our main character as a person (which ultimately happened), but I’m glad that as a result of their relationship, acceptance and understanding of each other came. Thank you for the happy ending to this story.
The April/October romance theme was ruined with the pissing & defecation as a part of the story. Up until then it was a story well told. No further chapters need be written if that's to be more of the same!