All Comments on 'My Best Friend'

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SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 4 years ago
Excellent plot

But I felt it could've been teased out more, with little hints in the stories of what they had done as friends together or places they have experienced. I would've liked to have known more about the couple: did they date others, go on double dates together, did they recommend friends to date, or disapprove of dates, even discouraging about their respective dates, etc. Knowing a little more about the characters and other pressures on them and between them, gives the reader a better handle, care more about their situation and be more on board at the eventual resolution.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Started out well, but it could have been SOOOO much more!

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