All Comments on 'My Best Friend Alice'

As it was meant to be. Great love story.

A cute story that probably rings true to some people. 5*.

Wow, a lot of love for this story. As a thank you, I've written a follow up, Hope you enjoy it.

Fantastic. I loved the story and the interaction between them. Thanks

A simple, believable story ….

Too Good Not To Be Better. Your sweet, believable story was annoyingly filled with missing apostrophes (Alices instead of Alice's, for example), periods instead of commas ("I'd like that." I said; throughout the story it should have been like this: "I'd like that," I said.), and the wrong pronoun (to Alice and I should have been to Alice and me). You are a very good writer but you could be much better.

Thank you for all the feedback. The views, favourites and ratings for this story have blown me away. I know my writing isn’t perfect, I exclusively type these stories on my phone and let’s just say it’s not easy and auto correct is a royal P.I.T.A, so my apologies for that. I should probably run my future stories past an editor - so if any editors out there fancy taking the job on, let me know. Thanks again

Loved the story. I would have appreciated some indication of what if anything the couple did about birth control. This is a major issue with young lovers - perhaps I missed it in the story. I was glad to the issue covered in the

author's recent story "Pining for Madison" I found a mis-used word, but rather than complain publicly I simply sent the author a private message.