by lovewords
i hope you continue this story. i want to see how they both will "crash" or who will be the one to admit it first. great story.
As I listen to Janis Joplin sing "Try", I wonder how this chick got it confused. Sex always changes the game.....like a bio-chemical reaction when you mix things that perhaps shouldn't be mixed?
You need an editor. This feels very rushed. I don't even know the girl's name. Take your time this could be a great story.
'Best Friends to Lovers' romances but I have to agree with anon on the editing...and, what is her name?
Storyline has great potential, but you went from talking about your sexual partners to 6 months later, you're saying you had no idea Quinn was so good. (In two sentences). Wheres the build up and sexual tension? What's the girls name?